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Dimple Shah's avatar

Hi Mary, this is Dimple from the workshop at Bread Loaf. Just wanted to wish you a very hearty congratulations! I’m so glad that you’re on your way to having your work out in the world.

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Mary Berman's avatar

Omg Dimple, hi, thanks! Fingers crossed, haha. I hope you’ve been doing well since the workshop!

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Dimple Shah's avatar

Yeah, hard at work trying to pivot away and de-center the Afghan narrative because of all the cultural appropriation issues it might run into. We’ll see how n where it goes. Totally appreciate the underlying message in this post, so thank you for that. It really is a long game😓

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Mary Berman's avatar

Oh man, yeah, I remember you talking about that in workshop. Good luck with it, revisions are hard!!!! Truly the longest of games but I loved your work, I have confidence in it.

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Dimple Shah's avatar

Thank you, that’s really kind of you. And thank you for all the suggestions and feedback. Most of everything you said was very much on point, and I have made notes to incorporate when I get to revision.

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Sylvia Wrigley's avatar

Mary, I love this! I love you! What fantastic amazing news!

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Mary Berman's avatar

Thank you!!!!

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Veronika Groke's avatar

Very happy for you, congratulations!! I have no idea what Bread Loaf is (I’m in the UK), but I loved reading your post. I always find it so interesting to see how different different people’s ‘how I got my agent’ stories are - makes me feel hopeful! 🙂

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Mary Berman's avatar

Thank you!!!! And for sure. Fingers crossed for you if you're querying as well!

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Veronika Groke's avatar

Thank you! Not quite yet, but hopefully in the not too distant future… 😅

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Robin Reardon's avatar

Yay for you, to keep going! Admirable. I queried maybe 12 agents over the course of 10 months with my first novel and got three really interested responses, each of whom decided they didn't have time to launch a new authors. Then I read about book doctors. "I don't need a book doctor," I said, but then I noticed their services included "agent referral." So I signed up with one who did offer advice that improved my novel, and then he referred me to an agent who sold that novel as well as the next one I was working on to a publisher. I stayed with that publisher for six books, until the depth of my characters and the richness of my plots left the publisher without a good marketing niche through which to sell them. My agent despaired of finding another publisher, so I'm not indie and have published several more books. But it's a hard job, this, and I'm seriously thinking of agent shopping again. Or maybe I should find another book doctor.

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Mary Berman's avatar

That's great! So wild to hear about other people's journeys – someone else commented this here, but they're all so different. It's good to know there's always another path open, at least!

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